Hmm sounds more like drum and bass to me, the tempo seems to be much closer to 180bpm.
The structure is good, though In my opinion it could use a pad to give ambienciness to it, and also a bit more reverb.
The wobble basses, I do recognize that they are made with massive straight away :P For me those were the aspects that need most improvement (obviously, since this was just experimenting). I didn't like the slower, higher that much. I can't say why, It just doesn't sound right.
Lead was simple but okay, and the FXes were great, especially the buildup bass at beginning.
I hope that you find anything I wrote useful!
Thanks! This was just to test dubstep sounds. Im not sure if the BPM is 180, I think its 150 or 140. :p
Thanks for the feedback. :)
I don't know why, but for some reason i got a pirate-y like feeling from this O.o
Melody is nice, and there's a lot of variation thanks to the second melody. The intro is also straightforward, so the ending isn't that bad really.
At first it sounded a bit distracting though. Maybe it was in fact because of the fast intro. I got a hold on it quickly nevertheless.
I could imagine this being used as a loop (without the silence at end it actually loops pretty well) in a hangar or on an airfield of some sort ^^
The intro was a bit boring, but the bass gave nice depth when it kicked in. I instantly thought of ocean loader when i heard the main lead :)
The composition is also great! The melody has just the right nostalgic feeling on it, and works well with other sounds going on.
Overall very nice and commodorish tune :) I will gladly listen to any chiptunes you publish!
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate that :)
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